Rula

Dec 25, 2016

The Lost Muse

So many days have passed by,
many nights have run too.
My pen's idle, my ink's dry,
can't say why or what I'm through.

The sun yet is still bright,
the shining stars and the moon;
I can see a promising light,
would it infuse my muse soon?

About This Poem

Last Few Words: Guess just wanted to say hello dear friends after a long leave.

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Jordan, JOR

Favorite Poets: I favor the ones who are closer to humanity and

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Comments

Hi Rula,

You've been missed. I hate to say
how much I relate to your poem,
my paper is blank so much of the
time and I can't find my pen.

Terrible to feel lost in the dry.

and many thanks for the read. So bad to hear that you're suffering the same. I keep saying to my self that it's only because I am so busy these days. I have moved to Jordan. New country and a new house. As I said, too busy with new changes. Let's wish it to be just a short time for you and I.
Thank you again.

hello Rula,

I know the condition which you describe...it is a frequent caller to my house. it leaves a person feeling abandoned and lost :(
I hope both you and Richard are soon called upon by your special friend named inspiration. you have done a very good job of expressing this condition! this poem deserves a title.

always, Cat

Dear cat

It makes my heart good to see you active here again. Reading and commenting on this little piece means alot. I also gave it a title as suggested by you dear.
Many thanks.

good title!

thanks for the warm welcome back :)

*hugs, Cat

Dear Rula

lovely to read you again though it appears that the paper is blank.
So you are in Jordan now I hope you and yours are well and that the new year will bring you words on gilded wings.
Look forward to more from you soon just ask and the words will flow,
Yours as always Ian. x

dear Ian

Thank you for your kind wishes. I am really grateful!
Hope all is well with you and yours.
Thanks again for reading and commenting.

Hey Rula!

glad to see ur return!
the old missing muses
Like loving the moon
and having overcast
weather forever....

always nice when they
do return once again!

like old friends!

thank U!

Mr Wolf!

Thank you

Mr. Wolf. Highly appreciate the warm welcome.

I can relate...

It's a distressing feeling to say the least, when you have the desire to put 'pen to paper,' but the words don't want to cooperate. I did read the previous reviews and being somewhat new to the site, I can tell you have been missed. With that in mind, welcome back. After reading this, it sounds to me as though your muse is returning.
I hope your poetic voice continues to move forward!

valene