I always wanted to write a sonnet
Sonnet of every poet
Poet that has a trustful pen
Pen that speaks of all Men
Men who care for true emotions
Emotions that make the difference
Difference that makes us humans
My sonnet bloomed a fruitful tree
Tree that later called Poetry
Poetry of every color
Colors that paint with hope
Hope that paints almost everything
Everything that touches humans.
Comments
you may start with me
Gee has started the theme
may see his
on my poem
Rula
ma'am
Loop Poetry
Hello, Rula!
Very clever form and wonderful theme and language. I wonder...is it necessary to include "a" and "the" at the beginning of the sentences? It seems this particular form would forgive that formality. I very much like this, and appreciate learning about it. May give it a shot myself, soon!
Thank you, Rula!
L
Thank you dear Lavender
You are totally right. Done as suggested.
How do you like the addition.
A very fun form. You can infinitely play with it.
Appreciate your priceless visit dear.
Oh, Rula!
This is wonderful!
L
Revised after Lave silently advised
I always wanted to write a sonnet,
sonnet of every poet,
poet x(that)x who has a trustful pen,
pen that speaks of all {the}x men,
men who care for true emotions,
emotions that make the difference,
difference that makes us humans.
just imagine
Hello Lovedly
Thank you, your suggestions taken.
Much appreciation.
I c the modifications and additional para
but for colurs
plural
a sight deviation which um ay correct
Rula
Teddy my dear
Your words inflame my muse. Can't thank you enough dear for your kind visit