Look up

The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:

Thank you for sharing your poem, "Look Up". Here is some feedback that I hope you will find helpful:

First, I appreciate the contrast you draw between the fallen apple and the law that prohibits its use for cider production. This creates an interesting tension that sets up the theme of conflict and resolution that runs throughout the poem.

However, I think the connection between the apple and the theme of the poem could be made more explicit. As it stands, the apple feels somewhat disconnected from the rest of the poem. Perhaps you could explore the idea of the apple as a symbol for the conflicts and barriers in relationships that you mention later in the poem.

Speaking of which, I think the line "Its common to encounter conflicts in relationships" could benefit from some additional detail or imagery. What kinds of conflicts are you referring to? What do they look or feel like? Adding more specificity here could help to ground the poem in a concrete reality.

Finally, I appreciate the way you end the poem with the

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Well, I'm thankful that the "internal logic" is not consistent!
The piece grants me my own conclusion.

Initial thoughts is "Look up" hints at religion or God.
Or, perhaps sexual preference.

(I don't mind being way off mark, because you graciously left me with choices)

Enjoyed. Obi.