The edge of his singing blade is dulled
His armor has grown stiff and rusted
There is no more to give
The windmills he has tilted against have won
His hidden brother is mortally wounded
Gone is the joy of righteous anger
Departed in the night of his torment
It could not stand the assault
He simply lives, there is nothing left
Nothing to fill the emptiness
The aching hole in his heart
He's held by the chains of yesterday
Hidden away, he plots his escape
Knowing it never will happen
Still wearing the smiling mask
That keeps his secret
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hi Gee
Being trapped within one's own past and skin can be a pretty bad thing. I really think this is a good poem to think about.....stan
Thanks Stan...
Thinking is what I was after. Not sure of the result yet. ~ Gee.
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Dearest Bro
Hon this is heartbreaking. Gosh hon youve changed your poems have always been wonderful but they have a keener edge. I maybe see it more not being here all the time.
We all have masks in many forms.
Kudos bow
Love and higgliest bugs sis xxx
Thanks Sis...
Yes... A keener edge indeed. Feeling pretty low and not sure why. Love and higgest bugs. YAB
YAS
Hon I suspect I know why. But you will be OK. Your strong man whos come through some swrious health issues in the past.
Love always and higgliest bugs YAS xxx