When one is alone
it's only then
one feels really lonely
all alone
time weighs heavy
how to pass it by
when alone miserably
O poet you are not
the only one all alone
we most of us similarly moan
wish that you no more
stay alone
get a sweeter one
to jingle with thee
thy lips
eyes
memory
soul deep within
may we all pray too
none in this world is left
like you
singularly alone
lovely poem you composed
see I kept my promise
returned
your poem now has a friend
in me earned
o poet you will never ever
again feel
ALONE
Comments
you have...
written something that touches a heart full of lonely. My only criticism is that the last line of verse four should be [within], not broken into two parts. Good work! ~ Geez.
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GEE
THANKS FOR THE TYPO also...
dear Lovedly,
your poem rings true. no one wants to be lonely. but some think that they want to be left alone. what they really want is the relief from pain. an excellent poem my friend!
*hugs, Cat
Cats
Thank you so much for your lovely excellence
It thrills ones heart when a poem is filled with appreciation.
I just read Steve's romantic poem
What a lovely Piscean you must be
speaks he in his Romantic brief.
Please congratulate him
Not every wife is a
ROSE.
dear friend,
I did as you requested, and he smiled ;)
*love & hugs, Cat
A SMILE' S A ROSE
IN SILENCE
DO thank him
he's a gentleman
thank him...
I just told him what you said, he thanks you and says that you are very welcome!
*hugs, Cat & Steve
KINDNESS
Cats Piscean friend
and Steve is?
hollo dear friend,
Steve is a Gemini
*hugs, Cat
I thought as much Cats
dual to a dual sign match
pisces saggys geminis and virgoes
r dual signs
one each earth water air and fire triangles
you very well know know
he...
keeps my boat afloat! he is very kind and loving. sometimes I think I don't deserve him.
*hugs, Dat
Good you r
Cats lucky Geminis r intelligent
they know
what why and when
ask him