jzarmel
Jul 02, 2016

Live and Let Die

So many against one another.
Watching souls plunge; freedom suffers
From liberty, money, power
Respecting only society's hour.
Live and let die......

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Style/Type: Free verse

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Esker

Esker

8 years 10 months ago

freedom and libertines!
many feel it..
many do it
from clubs and implements
caves to caverns
watchtowers to radar
We have come a long
way...to the end
of peace!

sad but true
reaping the ruin

thank U!