little light house

You and me sitting
in our
lovely little light
House staring
At the streams
Of dreams bellow
Wondering
What our light’s of life
Will Show
In the Delphic
Fog of
Our future bellow.

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Region, Country: Virginia, USA

Favorite Poets: Edgar Allan Poe homer Dante Alighieri Oscar Wilde

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Comments

Thank you

I hope your doing fine in this time of mass hysteria

Beautiful

This poem is just beautiful. I look at this and imagine a person staring into the waters below the lighthouse thinking of their future. Amazing! I look forward to seeing more.