raj
Mar 29, 2018

Life [Sunku]

Scramble,
unscramble
fill in the blanks

Decode
the abstract
essence of life

Truly
life is a
jigsaw puzzle

About This Poem

Review Request Direction: How does this theme appeal to you?

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Somewhere in the world, IND

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Comments

R

Thanks for the read. I didn't understand your comment. Do you mean that you feel that this is not poetic and/or ^5 is to mean that in some line you find the syllable count not conforming to Snku? Will appreciate your clarification.

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