life moves on and on

The end was inevitable
now we continue
the earth continues
its STABLE

CHANGE IS CHANGEABLE
only
CONSTANT

thanks to all

let the hearts bleed for a while
can't stop
then move on
the world
the earth revolves
we also it's natures law
so abide with me

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read

Comments

You are becoming more organized, in your own way

and this is appealing to me!

i believe you want "it's STABLE" instead of the "its"

Thanks to you all and

all Neopoets who scan and give me great comments

dear lovedly,

why don't you comment on other people/poets work? we need your help in that capacity, too!

*hugs, Cat

Cats yes I do

but no one likes my bluntness
and they have no clue
what can lovedly do

lovedly...

I, for one, LOVE your truth and bluntness!!!

*hugs, Cat

Cats you I believe

glad you love my
FAILINGS
TRUTH AND BLUNTNESS
all my life I have been treated
like a football
Do you also like to play
many kick around never mind
I can add you as one

this part of my poem
is ONLY fun
madam

dear lovedly,

I like the "game" of football, but I don't like being treated like one. I got a lot of that growing up. I am blunt and truthful, too. and I come from a family of female liars.

ever, eddy
*hugs, Cat

p.s.
I like your poems

Cats

you educate me
thanks

Yup...

stability is a much-needed commodity in this crazy world that keeps getting crazier. Nice job, lovey
~ Geez.
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wow Gee

you are on line first time Why haven't you read and commented on my CONTEST POEM COLOURFUL I wonder still
my poetric master thanks in advance+

I'll go look for it...

Don't know how I missed it! ~ Geez.
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Hopefully

Gee I'd love to hear from thee