lovedly
lovedly
Oct 24, 2018

Life is just a Mirage

Beautiful oasis you share with all
life is one such a fantasy too
we all know that today we are
tomorrow we may not be
'twill be an imagination
a real illusion may call it thee

but life transforms
from diamond to steel
and
in the cauldrons of times heat
we all melt too
what of a superficial mirage say you

We are as naught
all hope you knew
as we approach it
the further it moves

life so does evaporate too
a hallucination is what we all are

Me, we, he, she and you

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read

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Comments

zebra

zebra

6 years 6 months ago

Lovely Lovedly. some may say the universe, a crime without a criminal

"a voyeur possessed
of a fictional self in a run on dream
of passed and future
absent of a present"

IRiz

IRiz

6 years 6 months ago

If a hallucination permitted to make a comment, I like your poem and its genuine sadness.
If not permitted, I will nod silently.