Edward nigma
Edward nigma
Sep 23, 2020

life is a dove

life is a dove that soars through the misty sky full ambitious flamboyant fury never noticing that our soft white feathers of time starts To peal and now
its fearing that death is near and it turns blue and sheds a tear for it desperately doesn’t want to face that fear but still it flies right on by .
But then one day all of its feathers of time have all fallen off and realize to suprise that our world is over and our dove now plumitts down through the sorrowful sea of its joyous memories and once that sea of our memory finally subsides it then it washes away it’s tears and dies.

About This Poem

Review Request Direction: How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Is the internal logic consistent?

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Virginia, USA

Favorite Poets: Edgar Allan Poe homer Dante Alighieri Oscar Wilde

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Lavender

Hello, Hayden,
"...sorrowful sea of its joyous memories..." Just a few words which hold so much.
Thank you,
L

S

Good to see some poetic prose well done