liberation

aching carbon corpus
humiliating adventure --
diaphanated alarm

discovering humiliation
to be first step --
on path to liberation.

vcp

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism

Editing Stage: Not actively editing

Country/Region: USA

Favorite Poets: Wallace Stevens

Knocks our sails out for awhile, eh?

Humble pie is good. Food for thought (and the soul).

Kicks in the brain cells to make new neural connections.

;-)

Grazie molto