Let the sun shine on your face,
Let it wash and let it erase.
The pain of many years,
The upset and fears.
Let the sun wash it all away.
Let the sun shine on your heart,
Let it wash away the fear when you embark.
Let it make you smile with all of your soul,
Let it make you know you are in control.
Let it erase all confusion and doubt,
No matter what it is about.
Let it take over,
Lean back let it cover.
Stretch out your arms, lean back your head, breath deep,
Let the Love of God and Earth make you know you don't have to weep.
Let go, and let the sun shine all over you.
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Hi Nichole
a nice message you have in this write...i suggest you avoid repetition of the word "Let" ..i believe it would lift up your poem and improve the flow......
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Thanks a bunch i'll give it a whirl. :)
Okies..i will keep an eye for
Okies..i will keep an eye for the edited version...
Dear Nichole
I love how positive and encourgaing the message is in this poem. It is very good. I enjoyed it so much!
Love-Faith
Thank you
Thank you for your kind words, i wrote that when i began coming out of my shell. My mother in law told me to "Twirl in the sunshine for her" and i did and it felt so good, so i wrote this.
Thank you again.
Sincerely Nichole