length and strength
to my mind come two vitally important dimensions length and the power we all call strength .Both are equally important in all walks of life not only in the matter which some think out of this life but in every survey of imagination take a stride length means in poetry not being epicurial and the strength implies the power of conviction in your own diction of what one wants to convey direct and straight
upon the canvas of one’s dreams we all think of what the painting could be a piece of art like Mona Lisa’s eyes, a candle with a burning flame depicting the vibrations of love and emotion all such things are particles of what was said at the beginning length and strength of the poets own volition not what you my reader may have been thinking Human mind has both power and length an it’s the human mind that spreads the strength.
length and strength
to my mind come two vitally important dimensions,
length and the power we all call strength
Both are equally important,
in all walks of life
not only in the matter
which some think out of their strife
but in every survey of imagination
take a stride
length means in poetry not being epicurial
whilst strength implies the power of conviction,
in your own diction,
of what one wants to convey
direct and straight
upon the canvas of one’s dreams
we all think of what the painting could be
a piece of art like Mona Lisa’s eyes,
a candle with a burning flame
depicting the vibrations of love and emotion
all such things are particles
of what was said at the beginning
length and strength of the artists own volition
not what you my reader may have been thinking
Human mind has both power and length
and it’s the vision that spreads the strength.
Comments
I like this experiment
The stream-of-thought first version is for determined readers. The verse version looks more like poetry. The juxtaposition tells us something about ourselves.
You force us reluctantly to look into a meaningful cracked mirror,
very smart.
even cracked mirrors
do reflect.
albeit in a multitude of directions
cheers!