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Jan 10, 2017

learners poem

Nice words
Keep them coming
You have a heart
of a poet's inkling

Speak not of miseries
there are plenty
speak of happiness
as sufferings
are many

Many folks....
they need your positive messages
if any

Love and life are virtues to flow
that none or very few know
all that is....

We should feel happy
with what we have
and
what we don't
forget it.....

Greed is the biggest misery!!!!
by man made
Only

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read

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Comments

Sparrow

A good write, but don't forget we have a fertile imagination so in our poetry we can portray everything, there is, was or will ever be, plus the myths of history or made up from a mind that goes on a rampage throwing words out.
We are not evolved enough and maybe never will be to be able to write of just good things.
I liked this good part though, don't forget the comment side to show that a piece has been read..
Take care young Bard and know we are here with you,
Yours Ian..