Ian.T
Ian.T
Feb 12, 2013

Learn damn it

How can you feel these things I feel?
I am me, and the only one of me.
Each of us is unique in many things
Even Identical twins their own ways

If I am hurting just hold me
Not with your hands you clumsy beast
Hold me with your thoughts
Only those can be the same

If you tell me, I will not listen
I hold my own council in here
It has never let me down
What! Yours has let you drift

Damn! Do I have to tell you again?
Just get off my case, I could be insane
No I am fine, just stressed at your talk
I told you to just think, of my needs.

That’s better you are learning fast
I hear your thoughts alone at last
Now you can move away from me
I can hear you in my own eternity..

About This Poem

Last Few Words: What can you say when someone gets too close to you, LOL (Fiction)

Review Request Direction: How does this theme appeal to you?

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Leicestershire, Ex Moonraker, GBR

Favorite Poets: All those I meet or read about in my books

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Comments

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With thoughts. Lovely concept but all of us lack understanding of others because we can never walk in their shoes

Ian.T

Thank you for your visit and reply, I was probably stating a fact when writing this but just wrote it anyway lol,
Thanks again, Yours Ian.T

Seren

Seren

12 years 2 months ago

Someone that should listen to good counsel
Is not listening or maybe can't hear for the noise
In their heads

A different write from you its great to see
you exploring in words/worlds smile

Love always Jc xxx

Ian.T

This was a write out of boredom lol just wanted to put something on stream, could have put one of my old ones but wrote this instaed.
Thanks for your visit you are always so welcome to pop in to talk, Yours as always, Ian x

loved

loved

12 years 2 months ago

Each of us is unique....

thank the Lord we are not made
in a single factory
what of genes you say Google and you will find
how differently genes
from x and y chromosomes choose
even in case of twins
identical or not
twins can be two different sperms
and
two tiny eggs

Ian.T

Ian.T

12 years 2 months ago

Yes the difference twix us all is great to see, we train our brains to sort out things during our lives , not sure where the differing Intelligence comes in as our IQ is supposed not to change, though circumstances do have a tendency to dictate our final level or resting place.
I am a great believer in the point of applied intelligence that is the one that matters, if you cant apply it you ain't lol.
Thanks for popping in young Bard, Yours Ian.T