LA PETITE MORT
[English]
I feel my life force begin to weaken
a flickering flame on a candle
and my spirit resists a surrender
to an undetermined disconnect
not of its knowing.
my mind is clear to what
my heart will not see...
and my soul sorrows
for the pity of it all.
Comments
Joe
I feel the struggle.
Alid
Yes, Alid, every day. Thanks
Yes, Alid, every day. Thanks, my friend.
joe
Joe
I know pain
it can drive you insane.
Devoid of comfort,
forced to face the hurt.
You wait for it to end,
its a matter of when
but it stretched forever
and ever and ever..
Alid
...through time eternal,,,
...through time eternal,,,
God have mercy on us all
horrible and accurate
that U go through this...and your work is vivid of the descripts of what it is
doing....our mortality and humanity..great poetry!!
thank U
Thanks, Steven. I am an
Thanks, Steven. I am an oxymoron/
joe