Sometimes i wonder!
If the life we living is what is expected of us,
Sometimes i wonder!
if what is been preached to us,is what is expected of us to follow?
i become so lost in thougth,thinking we've been mis-lead!
If the Holy books conferred unto us,by the Generator f All Diversities (GOD)
has not been tempered with!
Only do i know,we've been fed with Beautiful lies,
Spreading around like a wild fire! aint a dis-believer,
i know the almighty being exist (GOD)
A pure mind does it all!
But i wonder if all this is necessary?
Comments
The raw truth.
Here goes.
Proofread your work. There are numerous typographical errors here.
Make sure that whatever you post is EXACTLY what you want to say.
This includes your critiques. I challenge you to find an error in what I say in these critiques.
Example:
"If the life we living is what is expected of us,"
If the life we (are) living is what is expected of us.
Note the grammatical error.
I leave it to you to find the others.
No, one more.
if what is (has, not is) been preached to us,is what is expected of us to follow?
Your tense is wrong.
Still want to work with me? I am a stinker about some things.