Time
ad infinitum
Man you talk of a time
ad infinitum
we will not be therein
then what cream
would you cherish
but simply white and human!
I wonder man
at least enjoy your today
when life came about
all was cold
now to heat we are becoming
touchy and bloody bold
what the hell
those who were iced
now enjoy heat- like
and
those like we two
only love to play
the politically poetic dice
the game of cats and mice
which is your side
for a ride?
AND
who’s going to throw the dice?
and who shall pay the price?
Jul 06, 2015
keep posting some one may be reading ------damned
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Lovely
I'm reading keep writing my friend
if you take out the ego the words will flow
Ad infinitum
Love Jayne x
i have Cancer of EGO
how will it ever go ?
yet I flow
thanks let go!
Please DON'T use the Cancer
Please DON'T use the Cancer word even worse you used it with regards to your ego ?
Tut tut ... J
what ever
can't separate it ever
What ever ? Really ? Jayne
What ever ? Really ?
Jayne
You pay the price
for writing pseudo-profound crap poetry.
This is not a gem.
i know
i love gems tasty
I don't.
Stop writing self-indulgent crap. Stop pleading for attention like an 8 year girl.
Write righting like the good poet you can be and everyone will stop taking you like a pathetic joke.
Glycerine drops will not work they are fake ok
Glycerine drops will not work
they are fake
these glycerine drops
will not work
they are fake
only on actor's screens they work
Tears just roll
as in love
no don't fake
em my love
see?
obscure bullshit
are u on
medicine
Lovedly I will not ever haunt
Lovedly I will not ever haunt your page as your just plain cruel
And I wont become a clown in your circus anymore
But I know the show will go on
Your ego demands it
J
O what a peach
O what
ur a peach