lovedly
lovedly
Jul 06, 2015

keep posting some one may be reading ------damned

Time
ad infinitum
Man you talk of a time
ad infinitum
we will not be therein
then what cream
would you cherish
but simply white and human!
I wonder man
at least enjoy your today
when life came about
all was cold
now to heat we are becoming
touchy and bloody bold
what the hell
those who were iced
now enjoy heat- like
and
those like we two
only love to play
the politically poetic dice
the game of cats and mice
which is your side
for a ride?
AND
who’s going to throw the dice?
and who shall pay the price?

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read

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Comments

Seren

Seren

9 years 9 months ago

I'm reading keep writing my friend

if you take out the ego the words will flow

Ad infinitum

Love Jayne x

weirdelf

Stop writing self-indulgent crap. Stop pleading for attention like an 8 year girl.
Write righting like the good poet you can be and everyone will stop taking you like a pathetic joke.

Seren

Seren

9 years 9 months ago

Lovedly I will not ever haunt your page as your just plain cruel

And I wont become a clown in your circus anymore

But I know the show will go on

Your ego demands it

J