Just in a moment
our driver turned right
a car following at jet speed
overtook him,
Wow just slight...
Heaven knows why
the other guy
was over speeding
Maybe he had an appointment
Dating his gal in heaven
he would have had us as company
four hoping and laughing happily
post a dry run nice dinner
But at that instant moment
our driver had maintained
his mental presence
else NEO
would have been busy
posting an Obituary
but as one guy always keeps telling here
no one will ever miss you my dear
Neo it’s Okay
but 1000 who read me on other sites
won't say
petulant guy!
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I liked the story, but then
I liked the story, but then you dropped on the gossip level and started talking about some issues with Neo. My friend, poetising your trubbles sometimes makes them stronger.
Relax and write your story for me as if I live on another planet and in another time. Choose which one future, modern, Stone age whichever.
Looking forward to hearing from you
poet Iriz
this is no story
this is the third
ACTUAL poetry of mine
in real life
first was
MOM'S SMILES
NEXT EUTHANASIA
and now this
first two you must have missed
these were posted in stream
in neo
Loved
you are so lucky if you had been here in this country you would have been totalled, see we drive on the left, if you think about it he would have hit us on the side.
Take care and look after you,
Yours Ian..
left or right
the guy...
other one...
was flying like a jet flight
trying to gain momentum
along the normal road site
it's all over now
since have already passed
many a midnight
We have been saved an immortal
ICU plight!
ha
lol