Another friend of longer times
left today without taking leave
he had no time to say good bye
he simply left
this world bereft
none can ask him why
he couldn't have had an answer
leaving unknowingly in silence
Now we bid good bye
Another friend of longer times
left today without taking leave
he had no time to say good bye
he simply left
this world bereft
none can ask him why
he couldn't have had an answer
leaving unknowingly in silence
Now we bid good bye
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Joys of Silence
Hi, Lovedly,
This feels like a peaceful, quiet tribute.
Warm regards.
L
so 'tis it lav
yes silent