Life is only the journey
from which we as a
purpose seeking society embark on
and from there I see only one path
the path in which we venture
into the unknown realm of
death and finally face our
fear of the enigma.
Sep 25, 2020
The journey of life
About This Poem
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Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
young brave poet I have realighned your poem
Life is only a journey
from which we
as a purpose seeking society
embark on
from there
I see only one path
that in which we venture
into the unknown realms
of death
finally to face our fear
of impending enigma
I hope you will like it ....you are a man ///young one with courage
lovedly
Thank you
I hope your doing fine in this time of mass hysteria
Edward
again I might suggest stanzas easier to read you may get even more reviews of your work
Thank you
I don’t know how to use stanzas or I don’t understand stanzas
Anyways I hope your doing well in this time of mass hysteria that plagues our populous