lovedly
lovedly
Dec 15, 2017

It's your Life

Live a life
as you have no other viable option

Think not of what others
said or say
live your life
in your own imitable way
there must not be another
I must say
as you have more brains than they

But if a follower you want to be
then there is nothing
that anyone can do to help ye

Just polish up your brain daily
mentally
as you brush your teeth

If you can't use your brains my dear
for your own health
you must fear
all else will simply endear.

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read

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Comments

alidzain

This one makes me pause. I don't really agree with the message but I supposed that's just your honesty in your thoughts.Here's mine

A free man
I am not
when this feet
still stands on land.

This mortal earth,
is not the true paradise
so says the scholars
whose words I've seen worth.

Then again
what I believe
are never meant
to be force onto a friend

Alid