brittle light
brittle light
Jun 12, 2018

"ISMS"

awash in muddled isms
slung about
like turd tossing monkeys

a stench

saturating the senses
smearing reflection
polluting all elixirs of hope
into potions of despair

who is immaculate enough to be immune
who is slippery enough to come out clean

About This Poem

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - draft

About the Author

Region, Country: upstate New York USA, USA

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Comments

brittle light

yeah! It's been awhile

thanks for the uplifting support on a downer subject
I'm glad it resonated with you.
I am sure we are not alone in this messy matter

thanks,

gregwa8

hostility towards all of our "educated" ism boxes. "journalism" "elitism" and the like. this is really in your face. funny. you express yourself well.

brittle light

...and now even humorists become "isms" when then are infected by other "isms"
a sad state of affairs, but I fear we are all infected to some degree.

except ME of course, (and maybe you), HA Ha ha
thanks for the compliment on expression...not always true, but appreciated immensely

later Greg,

gregwa8

posted my "ism" poem. ironic that u should say humorist because that's the direction I went. put a note for you on that post. :)

IRiz

IRiz

6 years 10 months ago

This one was harder to read than the previous poems. But I read it twice and it helped. The best part is the ending, it is rewarding.

brittle light

I don't really have a definitive style to speak of
I do write in the manner you have experienced most of the time (I think?)
but the "voice" changes when writing rants, and opinions
or when composing in oddly structured forms... some that can hardly be called poetry.
occasionally, I even try to sound like a "poet"... all cryptic and post moderny and twisted!
That never works out too well.

I have no real aspirations for, or about, my writing, so anything that can happen, does.
No publishers pushing in one direction or another is the best thing about being a dilettante.

anything goes

R

raj

6 years 10 months ago

to me "ism"..is the suffix to a belief others may choose to subscribe...else it remains like an unread poem in stream here [found not worthy of even criticism]....
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brittle light

"a belief others may choose to subscribe". The "ism" turns it into an ideology, that then is so often used as a cudgel, a weapon,
to beat, denigrate, abuse, intimidate, mock, terrify, or browbeat, anyone who is not a subscriber, especially when the "ism" is centered in today's political and social arenas.

Those are the "isms" I am talking about
I don't care about the silly, or irrelevant ones

thanks for the dialogue