Lightning flashed a thousand times
Early morning light
On isle of broken windows
So far out of sight
Out of sight of neverland
Morning, pouring rain
Spate of wind comes hurtling
Blowing cobwebs from my brain
From my brain come all these words
All these words and more
It hears the door close softly
Perfumed departing whore
On the isle of broken windows
Watch out where you step
From here has come from ever since
Where we have never slept
Never slept together
Always slept alone
Not because we wanted to
No calls upon the phone
We watched and waited all alone
Watched as lightning flared
Eyes of morning red
On the isle of broken windows
Never is there dread
Colour of the rising sun
Shone down a brilliant light
Lightning tore clouds asunder
Like a thief in dark of night
On the isle of broken windows
There is no dread or fear
No fear for loss -- your precious soul
No whispers in your ear
Telling tales of broken hearts
Telling tales of woe
To the isle of broken windows
These tales do not go
Isle of broken windows
Is in your own back yard
Looked for on every street
Each day a bit too hard
Your feet have walked a million miles
A million miles to mind it
Wind is blowing up a gale
But you will never find it--
Not ‘til you look in your own back yard
Try -- it’s not that hard
Even though your heart is torn
Ripped apart in shards
Shards of your own tearing
Shards others -- for you have torn
We wear them each and every day
Each one must be borne
Borne until they’re fixed at last
Borne unto the end
Borne until we reach the shore
In the morning with a friend
Silver, gold and diamonds--they will never buy it
with n0 love for life
yours -- and all the others
you will forever live in strife
Lightning flashed a thousand times
In early morning light
On isle of broken windows
So far out of sight
Out of sight of neverland
Some day there we’ll be
Each and every one of us
Just wait -- and you will see
While you’re waiting on the road
That never seems
To end
Pause -- and greet your friends
Friends you’ve missed so badly
Friends who never write
You meet upon this very road
On some crystal -- starry night
To isle of broken windows
You will sometimes guess
You were always headed there
One day -- you will confess
On sparkling sands of adamant and glass
You will enter bliss
Of happiness -- and
Your precious soul will pass
Lightning flashed a thousand times
Angels sing the song
On isle of broken windows
All of us will be there
Be there be-fore-long.
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Thank you, Shirley.
Thank you, Shirley.
I never thought about the many poems in one part before. I am probably standing too close to see.
Love,
Victor
When something feels
When something feels unfinished, I pare down or divide into segments.
Lots of good stuff, some of it *contrived*, no? Which is probably why the end doesn't work for you.
~
here I am with angels singing
on the Isle of Broken Windows,
my feet are bleeding with insight,
I can not fly.
~
WoW
Never scrap it. It is part of who you are. I have worked on some poems for years. Before they just fall in place. Still working on a few like that. It held my interest all the way through. But I did start to look for the end. I love the title. Great write. Take Care. huey
Dear Victor..
very philosophical positive write about how to take strife..grief..woes in one's stride...very uplifting....
warmly..