BlueDemon77
BlueDemon77
Jun 19, 2012

Innsmouth Sonnet

Innsmouth Sonnet by RW
(Thanks eternal to H.P. Lovecraft- IA IA Cthulhu ftagn!)

The flood tide pushed the barriers today
a wraith unseen is shredding its wet rage
the workers see the swells and run away
she's come intent to pull me from my cage

my look gave her permission, come inside
our business old, suppressed, and placed behind
she eddied close and kissed me satisfied
that I had called her back into my mind

The dried up stream bled forth a muddy cask
The gills tore loudly loose along my side
relieved I tore the last strands of my mask
To show the face so long I had to hide

We floated back to shore with certainty
and now we rule the depths eternally

About This Poem

Last Few Words: A Shakespearian sonnet gleaned from two H.P. Lovecraft stories "Dagon" and "A Shadow over Innsmouth" and the Dennis Paoli script for the film "Dagon".

Style/Type: Structured: Western

Review Request Direction: How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Is the internal logic consistent?

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Columbus, Ohio, USA

Favorite Poets: Rimbaud

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Comments

BlueDemon77

It humbles me to know you think I even did justice to his work. I've read every published word (fiction and essay) that he's ever done. He infused me with that cosmic darkness in his work that I find so effective. He explains it in detail in Supernatural horror in literature: a long essay that's published in book form. Thanks so much, you've made my day.

Ron
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