I need sweets

help!!
i'm running out of sugar
yeah,
the one that makes life taste better
the color!!
it doesn't really matter
it could be white or brown
or of lavender

anything that'd sweeten my days
when they taste bitter and sour.

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Last Few Words: Just a silly thought ..I think!

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Region, Country: Jordan, JOR

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Sugar

My fix
Instead of ecstasy and cocaine
My high
When it hits my brain
My relief
For my cravings
And yes
It does make my life less bitter and sour!
Rather than pastries cakes and flour

Horses always have a lump and they love it. Why shouldnt we?