JUST LET ME
B
let me not eclipse
fathomless seas
will all
ye
I still live
pardon me
Apr 04, 2022
I LIVE TO SEE
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
I
will only pardon if I know your shortcomings! Would you please let it out?
dearest friend lovedly,
what is wrong? are you all right?
*hugs, Cat
I was free needn't worry
as Gee was asleep
just posted a few words
as I gassed
the market cost had RISEN* * TYPO Gee is diamond like vigilant
I saw last evening
bless all car owners
a car I have
N O N E
Thank heaven
I heard that!...
I was just resting my eyes. The market cost is not ridden, [it has risen].
~ Geez.
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Gee you are entitled
what has ridden and risen
Kindly elucidate
I've been living in oblivion lately
Poet Gee you sound so softly
lol
You said...
in your comment to Cat, that the market cost of gas had [ridden]. I reminded you, that the proper word was [risen]. Softly is my trademark. ~ Geez.
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must have been a typo
at night I'm more blind
no sun does shine