I feel ...do you too

I feel dry
nothing left to try
time to
say
goodbye
don't ever be shy
and
ask me not why
let time fly by
the world will also
time to part comes too
for anyone including me and you
still I say and ask of you
How do you do
who!

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read

Comments

Hello Lovedly

A normal feeling we might get some day(s).
I don't think you need the last "who"
Or do you? :)

yeah abs right

I suppose so
we all are human
and
aged poets of neo

lovedly

interesting use of rhyme but still got your point across

thanks a lot

Shadowdancer for your maiden comments
would love more
let peace be the world