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I’m not Blind! Or Am I?

I am not colour blind
But blind,
And my hearts’
Not red,
I’m told it’s white
Red hot
That's how I live
So ever after,
happily

Let love be blind
But under the sheets
No lights are needed
Tis the warmth of the hearth
The breath
That we value most
You love me
And
I’d you toast

So is loves divinity
A gift of eternity
Where’s the need
Of others invasion,
When love and lust
Can be the very most
Satisfying equation

Ah! Cause of
A loveliest incision
As two merge
With one another
Arrives a younger

Yours must just rise
Then you will
Even if you
Really are blind
See love
With your third eye
Beneath the blinds
If you really have one

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: ROU

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Comments

wesley snow

but for the line breaks in the last bits. I have no idea how to rearrange them (and wouldn't expect you to), but I stumbled with them. Ah, free verse. It is a difficult concept. Otherwise a sharp work.
istan

loved

loved

13 years 4 months ago

as free as loved
or better still,
ISTAN is
Thanks let it be
as it is

Geezer

Geezer

13 years 4 months ago

can I say, after those glowing endorsements?
Great work, Loved. ~ Gee