Bonitaj
Bonitaj
Nov 19, 2010

OF HUMAN BONDAGE

We are not the same persons this year as last; nor are those we love. It is a happy chance if we, changing, continue to love a changed person. -William Somerset Maugham, writer (1874-1965)

We're chained to the post
Prometheus at most
tedious forebears of a terrible task
trying to love those who love us best -
even though the passion has past.

Throwing stones on the pond
the ripples ever widening the effect
on the center
Continually expanding and dividing
our responses changing,
but impasse is a formidable mentor.

BJ 13 November 2010

*Title of a book by W.S. Maughham

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Tip of Southern Africa, ZAF

Favorite Poets: Too many to narrow down

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Comments

lou

lou

14 years 5 months ago

It's very true we do change so much, I feel I'm quite different than I was before neo crashed. Loved the poem, only thing I would say is, I think it would read better if you took out the words ' in the centre,' from the 2nd stanza.

Lou

Bonitaj

Sorry to come back to this so late - with my humble thanks!
You have a keen eye - so your comments are always valued!
Boni