Poetic showers,
Song, blanket
Pulling, breathless breathing,
pushing
Heaving
This is a cute and maiden
Pornographic measure of ecstasy
They have permitted
As it scores in dignified decency
The gradual lust
Slowly rises the masculinity,
As orgasms
He her first
The feminity
Laps all juices of joy
A flower full of petals strewn
For the bee or boy
To sexily enjoy
Such wondrous lovemaking
Can only pour
From the
Mind of a lover of yore
That one,
you must have been for sure.
Take note the springs
Of love have sprung
No snows can dampen
All the fun
As the expanse of a cloudy night
Gives her the freedom
As within the hearth of fire
He does burn the boredom.
The ideas for this poem
emanates from the mind of
some Sinile Grandpa.
Comments
Dear Loved...
a good one...but left me wondering about the source of inspiration which as you have said. is
The ideas for this poem
emanates from the mind of
some Sinile Grandpa.
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Don't waste ur time Jess
Loved is now lovedly
no one reads old poetry
why only * it?
I'm trying to get the Undiscovered list manageable.
No way can I comment on every 4 year old poem however I have found some members who have left and might return.
You don't need to waste your time replying to my .'s
lavish createments
certianly a lustful and carnal adventure
with notations of poetic nature
heavy poeting
your works are certianly alive
and belief in subject matter
is here
Great thing about the originality
of believing in your poetry
and finding that voice
and style that gets it out there
is like a confident
move thats all your own
borrowed a bit in the
beginning as any influence
but eventually
tamed to turn
wonders for the show..
Thank You!
And thanks to esker for such beautiful comments
thanks again lovedly/loved