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lovedly
Nov 28, 2020

HELLO POLE STARS

If you permit me to say
poet,
your poetry is a class
but well above the level I feel
of those who NEO'S hand- clasp

You can't be understood
by normal guys of my unintelligent level
without a thesaurus.

So good as you may and are
beyond reach of a guy
in hurry
in a car
you in the wilderness of time are
a lonely star
distance wise beyond the Pole Star

I remain in my old perforated car

About This Poem

Last Few Words: TRY COMPOSING SIMPLER POETRY UNDERSTOOD BY CLOTS LIKE ME What have you to say greater poets

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read

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