Striking Mother lode
Many light years beyond abode
To enforce our code
Dec 15, 2017
Heavenly Home?
About This Poem
Last Few Words: Recently an announcement was made by a leading leader of a leading nation that Space would be the next arena of exporting values. Several select sovereign states on Earth have already been cleansed according to the dictates of special interests and another irritant power is in the cross-hairs for a political and cultural makeover courtesy of the nefarious neocolonial nexus, Similarly, Space is about to be imprinted, fingerprinted, copyrighted, incorporated, indoctrinated and parceled out by spaced-out Earthlings.
Style/Type: Structured: Eastern
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
Comments
Spaced out Earhlings may be our redeeming value.
as long as they don't make us read Vogon poetry!
Dig your work as perhaps few here do.
Try IRiz's's new form 'Duotriquat'. Three lines, 2 syllables, 3 syllables, 4 syllables. It opens new vistas in compression of meaning,
Jess
Thanks. Just because you recommended it, I will compose a Duotriquat (original format and the name is more inventive than Rhyku).
Duotriquat
Wordy Account (Duotriquat)
Two words
or Three words
Leading forwards