Geezer
Geezer
Feb 14, 2013

Heated Hearts...

I felt a trickle of warmth
as the frozen part of me thawed
One night of heated passion
soothed years of being clawed

When I think of the early days
none too sure of what to do
I smile at the thought of us
so different, me and you

Lust laid down in the backseat
being only second best
Love grew slowly stronger
passing every test

Time has melted our hearts together
welded the parts real strong
Trials buffing out the rough edges
on days that seemed too long

Now I look forward to each day
the sun shines down on my face
The cold, icy lump in my chest
has warm, love of you in it’s place

About This Poem

Last Few Words: Heated Hearts is part of my Valentine's Day present to my wife.

Style/Type: Structured: Western

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: New York State - USA, USA

Favorite Poets: Poe

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Comments

Ian.T

Ian.T

12 years 2 months ago

A lovely tribute to a wonderful Lady,
Nothing else to say as there is no need, only give her our best thoughts..
Yours, Ian.T , Anne & friends

Geezer

she knows how much I love her, but says; It's real nice to know that everyone else knows too! ~ Gee

lonlyhrtsclub13

lonlyhrtsclub13

12 years 2 months ago

Can certainly warm the heart...restore faith where it was lost....it can also have the opposite effect...glad u found someone who was able to keep the ice from ur heart

Geezer

Geezer

12 years 2 months ago

In reply to by lonlyhrtsclub13

no one more glad than I. After two previous marriages that didn't work out, I didn't know if I would ever love again. She constantly amazes me with the depth of her feelings. ~ Gee

lonlyhrtsclub13

How tough love can be...amazing when u truly find the one....