He Crept

He crept up on me
slowly
played my strings
tenderly
lowered walls
gingerly
built trust
persistently
teased me
constantly
praised me
loudly
I love him
unconditionally

About This Poem

Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism

Editing Stage: Not actively editing

About the Author

Region, Country: Ireland, IRL

Comments

Heya Sue

I like the shorter lines I often use them myself, I really liked the poem I hope you showed him ;)

sincerely JC

Ah thanks so much well I

Ah thanks so much well I married him lol glad u enjoyed
kind regards
Sueb

I've been engaged for over 10 years one of these days I will marry his arse just hasnt seemed that important to me, im happy hes happy, he on the other hand is another matter he cant wait to get married

~JC

i only got married this

i only got married this y ear in July and the hardest part is living with him because we didn't beforehand u have all that work done lol x

You are such a victim

sueb, almost every poem of yours I have read makes you sound pathetic.