#haiku 6

a wren flaps away
beak full of juicy meal worms
for fledglings revel

About This Poem

Review Request Direction: How was my language use?
How does this theme appeal to you?

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: Nigeria

Favorite Poets: Jess Tapper

Comments

Yes Molly78 ,you are totally

Yes Molly78 ,you are totally right and I thank you so much for this comment.I appreciate it.

Vivid imagery created by you

Vivid imagery created by you Marvel in this Haiku....a pleasure to read it...

regards..

Thanks so much raj, I

Thanks so much raj, I appreciate your comment.

Thanks so much raj, I

Thanks so much raj, I appreciate your comment.

Hi Marvel and Molly

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Regards...