War crimes court cases
Not just weak nations basis
Start all states phases
Nov 26, 2017
The Hague Trials:
About This Poem
Last Few Words: Trials and tribulations should not be restrictive trails leading to the doorsteps of selected tribes.
Style/Type: Structured: Eastern
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
Comments
you've need to expand your poetic prowess
being stuck in a rut is no good, sorry.
this, like many others of yours, is forced.
apologies
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Gunnar
Please read all my other poems posted before coming to a hasty conclusion. As always, whatever your final opinion is, you are entitled to it and thanks for your feedback.
Gunnar
Please read all my other poems posted before coming to a hasty conclusion. As always, whatever your final opinion is, you are entitled to it and thanks for your feedback.
Gunnar
Rhyku is my original version of Haiku poetry (three lines of 5-7-5 syllables that rhyme with a corresponding title) and that is the reason why many of my poems are Rhykus. While a number of reviewers may find the poems forced and without depth, Rhykus are like the Twitter version of Poetry.
Rhykus convey a first line issue, followed by a second line of detail and subsequently a third line of the solution.
I find Rhykus effectively encapsulate political as well as social issues in a short format that allows those that view / read the Rhykus, possessing limited time and short attention spans, an ideal form of expression that is readily understood.
Reviewers
Politics makes for a range of prose