He sought glory.....
end of story
Jun 03, 2015
GLORY SEEKER
About This Poem
Last Few Words: With shoulder and arm problems I' limited to brevity. So here's the short poem of a glory seeking warrior
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Stan
I shall help you to cross this street, and make a senryu out of your words.
I cannot rest until you are better worded and rested.
A shinning brave knight
He sought out glory, clean or gory
Here endeth his story.
Love you lots La, La.
Yours, Sparrow
so few words
i really liked this to continue unto one of your great writes,but if this is it I'm thinking mnemonic
Stan
here's my contribution
He sought glory with his sword,
displaying courage in battle,
earning respects, land
and a grand title
but..
his greatest glory is not attained
by any form of violence
it is gained when he found
and fought for his woman
for no gold or silver can make a man complete
in the absence of a lover's caress
Alid