Michael Anthony
Michael Anthony
Jan 09, 2021

Gimme Shelter

The Stones and the Ramones
Social Distortion, out of the LA Punk scene
even Miles and Coltrane
She doesn’t need them

Still, in that void, there is a rhythm
found in her eyes, and in her heart
I let the sound sweep over me
It makes its own music

I listen to it over and over
A melody so beautiful
it can make you feel sorry
for blueberry pie

Her music has a piano
that finds our note of joy,
and a saxophone too,
that cries soulfully
somehow saying what I feel

I don’t know if she understands
the music she makes for me like I do
even though I can hear it plainly
simply when she breathes

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism

Editing Stage: Not actively editing

About the Author

Region, Country: San Francisco Bay Area - USA, USA

Favorite Poets: Bukowski

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Comments

Ray Whitaker

i read any I find with an interest unequaled in most other poetry. it"s just me, with a rich history of music. attempting as you did to give the "flavor" of bands to the first stanzas... and you gave it a beautiful turn at the end. nice

Asche Keegan

*applauds* This poem is so sweet and magical, and I can almost hear the music of it in my mind. "A melody so beautiful it can make you feel sorry for blueberry pie" Perfect!!

Fantastic job :)