Life struggles polished her,
a gemstone.
Jun 27, 2017
The Gemstone ( Imagery WS... Ex. 2)
About This Poem
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Life struggles polished her,
a gemstone.
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Almost suggestive of a river stone.
"Life struggles" not man.
Hi Rula,
Such intensity packed into so few words.
Beautiful strong imagery.
Hi Rula
In my mind the struggles could range from water's wear to the intense heat and pressure which first formed the gem