people are odd
some give -- some take
perhaps more takers
than givers
a
debatable question?
givers are banks
always open
currency -- love
and care
those who make
withdrawals -- coming and going
don't often
make deposits
leave behind
in their wakes
destitution of
emptiness unwanted
ran out of currency
gave it all away
bank closed.
Comments
if it should rain
if it should rain
currency of the heart
how much should I
keep
and what would I
give away,
perhaps save it for a
rainy day?
~A
Anna,
Anna,
Good question, and many ways to answer. I would hold some in abeyance just for you to make some more.
Victor
give
This is a very good example of form reinforcing words. This amateur spots no errors..........scribbler
TO GIVE
During the course of my life’s sojourn,
I have had the fortune
To serve upon many a rich guy
And still poor,
As they want all to them give more
My dear,
They were so often goaded by me,
Give for Lords sake
Heaven has given enough to thee.
They passed away
In the doldrums of time,
None looked at them,
When they were
By time defined,
As immortal takers
Ere they left a trail
Of sadness far behind
That’s when I learnt
A lesson or two,
Takers are a plenty,
Givers a minuscule few