futuristic sexuality

Loved. Are you purposely trying to be *out there*? ET phone home! Take a seed, and grow it, please! I'm curious, do you still have a fan base?

This poem is just bad and I don't mean that in a good way.

~A

p.s. poetry like this would kill any romance, and without romance sex is no more than mental masturbation.

Ha! I'm sure as many read trash novels, visit porn sites and engage in *extramarital activities*, pedophilia, slave trade and murders, whether government sanctioned or not. Lots of folks still look up to Hitler too. I digress.

That doesn't mean your poetry is good, not by a long shot.

Someone has to get real, dear. Your ego is totally out of whack, it's so encrusted with self-serving trite. I'm just asking you to take one pearl and make it shine with the luster you may be hiding with all your trying to be *unique*.

And don't worry I won't ever waste my time reading you again, I was hoping to see some improvement. But I suppose a million apes typing on a million keyboards will eventually write Shakespeare. Not!

Cheers, Loved, after all that is said and done, you are Loved even if it's not because of your poetry. :-)

~A

Darling, I said the poem was bad. And because you repeat (ad nauseum) your followers, still doesn't make you a good poet. End of the monkey serial. Hint: eat bananas.

:-)

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Social graces are lost in this interaction?
Do you both know each other well ?
Or is it a non British interaction?