Future's not ours to see

Angels
fairy tales
nursery rhymes

Parents
and Teachers
make kids believe

Their souls
now recite
Que Sera Sera....

About This Poem

Last Few Words: This is inspired in the realization of the stark unreality of the Nursery Rhymes and Fairy Tales we teach innocent kids only to realize when such innocent lives are lost to school killings that they are just fantasies

Review Request Direction: What did you think of my title?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Somewhere in the world, IND

Comments

DEAR RAJ

this a unique piece of poetry and creates a sense of childhood but also the cruelness of reality .in my opinion the title ''THE LIES WE BELIEVE'' would have suited better but that is just my opinion. over all great poem

Hi HW

Thanks for your read, comment and suggestion about the title. I will give it a thought for sure...
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