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FRIEND AND NOTHING MORE
Let it happen once before,
It will not happen any more:
Did you really think that I was such a bore?
My heart wasn’t yours to take,
You see, it's really for my sake
That I must not let it happen any more-
Was it so hard to understand?
All I asked for was a friend
And nothing more…
Writin’ letters, makin’ plans,
Was I boy, or was I man?
Now I wish the sea would roll onto the sand…
For, if a lesson's to be learnt,
This boy just got his fingers burnt-
But he'll forget you if he must, and if he can-
For he'd rather be alone,
Than risk you spit upon
His outstretched hand… .
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Comments
Psyve
I like it , sorry can't see anything to improve.
lou
Lou
Thanks for reading. Glad you liked it.
Cheers
Psyve
then what are friends for
may i ask
of u just to be sure?
Loved,
Thank you for stopping by to read
Psyve
Dear Psyve,
Do you ever write anything that sucks? LOL! I can really relate to this song, as it has happened to me several times. Now I'm afraid to put myself out there. I really liked the last section:
Writin’ letters, makin’ plans,
Was I boy, or was I man?
Now I wish the sea would roll onto the sand…
For, if a lesson's to be learnt,
This boy just got his fingers burnt-
But he'll forget you if he must, and if he can-
For he'd rather be alone,
Than risk you spit upon
His outstretched hand… .
I have no suggestions, only appreciation for the work.
always, Cat
Cat
I've written my share of things that sucked.
LOL.
Glad you liked this one and felt you could relate. It's part of the human condition, I guess....
Still we keep putting ourselves in positions of implicit faith and trust in people we feel a strong connection to with our hearts, even if our brains tell us to act differently...
Psyve
This gives me goose bumps, it
This gives me goose bumps, it's THAT beautiful.
Thank you for sharing your heart.
~A
Anna,
Thank you for your comment.
Nice to know that you felt moved by this one.
I do appreciate your stopping by to listen to my songs and your words of encouragement.
Psyve
P.S. I may be a tad inactive on this board for the next 3-4 weeks, as I will be travelling and am not sure how much connectivity I will have....
Shirl,
Thank you for taking the time to read and for your kind words.
Am pleased this struck a chord with you.
Psyve