raj
Jul 30, 2018

freedom

set the birds free from a clouded mind, caged they're stolen of their lofty spirit
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About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Direction: How does this theme appeal to you?

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Somewhere in the world, IND

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Comments

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tyro

6 years 9 months ago

a very good maxim, one to remember

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raj

6 years 9 months ago

appreciate your reading and your appreciative comment...will encourage me to try out more one line poems...
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