Members meeting groan
Seven equals six plus one
Unity alone
Jun 11, 2018
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About This Poem
Style/Type: Structured: Eastern
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
Comments
OriginalRhyku
As Japanese writing goes this was really an adding exercise, I think that seeing you have the syllables count right there are better things to lay before our eyes.
But as a template excellent,
Yours Ian