Barbara Writes
Barbara Writes
Oct 09, 2011

First Love

 

First Love

 

Just a dream, just a dream

That’ll never, never be

A love lasting more than thirty years

To a man that’s taken

 

A man true and faithful

To a love from his youth

A girl who happens not to be me?

As we lost touch some time ago

 

Some wait a lifetime

Not ever thinking of second chances, but

First love sometimes returns to some

With memories etched in hearts of both

 

The proverbial rocking chair

Sundry portraits of experiences

About other loves not meant to be

Before bonds of union reunited

 

Living happily forever after

From stretches of life as a young one, and

Knowledge of wisdom as a mature soul

Finally, embracing love with your first love

About This Poem

Last Few Words: one thought create a poem

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: United States, USA

Favorite Poets: Billy Collins

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Comments

faithmairee

I agree with Cat on this one. Your poem is verywell done. I wouldn't change anything and think it's just great.

Love-Faith