There once
was a gunfighter
He was
known throughout
the land
People knew
of his
exploits
far and wide
Now he is
standing
stock still
His eyes
on his challenger
Hands at
his sides
ready to grab
his six shooter
in a split second
Hands pulsating
waiting to feel
the grips
of his guns
Sweat coming off
his brow
His long coat
fluttering
in the wind
And waiting for
the clock tower
to chime
high noon
Thinking about
all his
past fights
And maybe that
this will be
his last
Finally
the tower chimes
And two shots
ring out
After
the smoke
clears
The gunfighter
laying
on the ground
with his gun
next to him
A wet
red spot
on his chest
where the
bullet entered
Blood soaking
his shirt like
water soaking
a sponge
The gunfighter
is no more
Even though now
he is destined
for the graveyard
People will still
talk about him
and his exploits
He has become
a legend
among gunfighters
Comments
The Fall of a Legendary Gunfighter :)
Starters, interesting storyline. Brings to mind movies of the Wild Wild West days
when gunslinging was the order of the day. I see that you're a military enthusiast
if not a military man. lol.
Your title is great, leads the poem from start to finish. The language is not complicated.
The wording is simple to understand.
great storyline.
Thank you WonderGolly
Thank you for the comment WonderGolly. It is greatly appreciated. This poem was actually inspired by a Bob Dylan song (Knocking on Heavens Door).
Benjamin