Lavender
Lavender
Oct 03, 2022

Fall Off The Ladder

As I watch his frame
ascend each step,
climbing further upward,
I warn my adult son,
"Please, do not fall off the ladder."

There is a satisfying sound
to those words when
spoken all together:
fallofftheladder.
My poetic mind wanders
to zen-like thoughts, and the
possibilities of such a quirky word...

Fallofftheladder, (NC, IA, WI)
has a delightful ring to it,
Pop, 652, 2015 census.

Or perhaps it is an
equilibrium condition
brought on by riding
too many roller coasters.

I can imagine a menu
listing a large pizza -
extra toppings over extra toppings,
smothered with mounds of cheese,
selling out after each Friday
night football game.

But for now, I hold this
fifteen-rung monster
with my eyes closed,
pray that this kid
descends safely, and upright -
unlike the sizable broken branch
adorning the roof.
***

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

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Country/Region: United States

Favorite Poets: I tend to read Ted Kooser

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Geezer

Is the [Fallofftheladder], [NC, IA, WI] a real place? Multiple places?

I am not making a connection between two stanzas in the middle;
are they just things to think about while holding the ladder
so as not to think too much about the fact that the son is on the ladder?
A little explanation here, could go a long way to making or breaking this piece.

~ Geez.
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Lavender

These are all off-the-cuff thoughts while dealing with the anxiety of holding the ladder. I'll put some thought into this to make that more apparent.
Thank you!
L

lovedly

yes memories last for ever
just recollect
DOG WALKERS Lav